Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Wealthy nations often contribute financially to their less prosperous counterparts, but this has shown to be inadequate in eradicating poverty. I therefore concur that rich countries should opt for other methods of assistance, as opposed to monetary aid, for countries that are economically challenged.
The frequent transfer of funds from wealthy to impoverished nations may provide a short-term solution, but it falls short of liberating these nations from the harsh cycle of poverty. It is notable that corruption is rampant in many underprivileged nations. Thus, the funds dispatched may not reach the hands of those struggling in dire poverty. Additionally, challenges rooted in flawed governance or bureaucracy cannot be resolved with financial aid alone, as it is not the place of one country to interfere in another’s domestic concerns.
Given the lack of effectiveness of financial aid in eliminating poverty, well-off countries should consider alternate forms of aid for poorer countries. One such method could be offering skill-based education to improve the educational standards in the struggling countries. Education, or the lack thereof, is often a major cause of poverty in disadvantaged countries and this could be rectified by more prosperous countries offering basic job training. Moreover, technical training could be another viable form of aid. By disseminating advanced technical knowledge, countries in need could modernize their industries, elevate their global competitiveness, and thereby, take strides towards alleviating poverty.
In conclusion, I advocate for affluent countries to provide more resourceful forms of aid, such as knowledge and technical expertise, rather than direct monetary contributions. This strategy, I believe, will enable struggling nations to combat poverty more effectively.
(By Khang IELTS- IELTS MASTER HCM- ENGONOW- Band 8.5)
